Is this a good Haiku Poem?

China's sunset view


The taste of green tea


A wise old man takes a sip


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If you like it tell me if you dont can you help me tweak it up a bit.....Thank you

Is this a good Haiku Poem?
It's supposed to be 5, 7, 5 not 5, 5, 7. Other than that, it's a cool poem. The content is fantastic.
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Reply:A true Haiku takes a nature theme and "humanizes" it, or personifies it. Like this Haiku of mine.





Blade of grass giggles


While the fresh morning sunlight


Softly licks the dew.