Do you like my new love poem that you demanded so firmly?

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My China Cup





Porcelain, painted


Flowers,


Reds, pinks and greens





My china cup,


Hangs from a hook,


On display for all,





Some come to see her,


Never to touch,


Always unbroken,





Tea taster, I


Carefully put lips,


To My China Cup





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Do you like my new love poem that you demanded so firmly?
I cannot believe we got a "Breakfast in America" quote on this thread--how incredibly random.





I like this one TD. Last three lines: awesome.
Reply:I liked my Granny too.
Reply:I love it


but i dont get the message


unless its not supposed to have one then ....never mind
Reply:I'm slightly thrown off, but I thought the creativity was great. You have a very unique style and I think you should keep going. Consider publishing on Poetry.com. You're headed in a great direction, so keep on writing!!
Reply:Very nice. China Cup. Quaint name, China Cup. I suppose this poetic style is in conformity with some formal style as to which I am clueless. It's not Haiku but it has that flavor. I hope that it will always remain unbroken for this poem to hold true. If it is indeed a love poem, then she is quite a fragile possession. And yes, keep your hands off my girlfriend, she's the only one I got. Not much of a girlfriend, never seem to get a lot.
Reply:on a scale of 1-10 i would give it a 6.7, but it's heads above the rest as far as people on yahoo asking "is my poem any good?"
Reply:Yes...you should keep going...then wipe and flush...

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